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Title: Silence Settles Over Night

Author: Aditou

Genre: General/Tragedy

Rating: T

Pairings (if applicable): Mahaado/Isis, though it's really up to how you interpret it.

Summary: As the moon watches, unblinking, Mahaado and Isis speak of what is, what will be, and what could have been.

Why it's good: For a couple of characters that get so little attention in this fandom, this author writes them surprisingly well. The fic itself is rather short, and that's really all it needs - the meaning behind the dialogue and action comes across very clearly to the reader. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but to me they got completely lost in the beautiful imagery this fic provided. ♥ And that's really all I can say about it, as I feel that it speaks for itself far more than I could. :3;
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From:aditou
Date:February 1st, 2007 11:28 pm (UTC)
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O_O

Thank you so much for...wow, I'm flattered. Your praise is really too kind.

Which grammatical errors were those? *embarrassed*
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From:cresselia
Date:February 2nd, 2007 12:07 am (UTC)
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XD Just a couple of teeny comma placements, but it wasn't too noticable at first glance. It took a few re-readings to actually find them :X;
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From:aditou
Date:February 2nd, 2007 01:04 am (UTC)
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Ah! I see; thank you. :D